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Draw this again by Kivei Draw this again by Kivei
Decided to redraw an old picture of mine from last year c:
Just a little side to side comparison, hope I improved a nice amount = w =<3

Original image - [link]
New image - [link]
Blank meme - [link]
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:iconbossanovaink:
BossanovaInk Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice! I personally prefer the hair without the dark lines to outline it. I think if you continued to use the shading as you've already done a bit to separate a bit more chunks of hair it would have a very nice effect.
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:iconkivei:
Thanks c:
I'll try that next time I draw something.
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:iconlemon-yelloww:
There's lots of improvement, especially in shading! Well done you! ^^ However what struck me as being slightly odd is that in the second one the hair has no defined lines, which it seems as if it should have, as the body does... For this style I'd actually say the hair is better in the first, you should combine the defined lines with your improved shading and it would be perfect! Of course this is only my opinion, this may be your style, sorry for being a little critical, it's still awesome! Keep up the good work! =D
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:iconkivei:
Haha, it's alright c:
I'm still not quite used to drawing hair with my tablet, the lines usually come out wonky ; 3 ;
I'll keep it in mind, thanks for the advice c:
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:iconryetou:
your shading improved a lot. xD
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:iconkivei:
Thanks, I really hoped it would c:
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:iconleiaw10:
I like the original more lov it
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:iconkivei:
Yeah, I guess it depends on peoples preferences c:
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:iconleiaw10:
both really good (:
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Zedna7 Jun 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
nice improvement. I like your style
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